It's more like the creator could actually make money off of non-fan content. The Wind's Disciple is an excellent example of a full game that is sadly limited by being fan stuff. If the premise of a game CAN be detached from a fan setting, it should. If not, that's fine.
I have some original ideas lined up after I finish this game. This one is more like a passion project so even if it don't make money it's okay. My main objective is to improve my skills and have some fun in the process. But I do undestand your point.
this was actually a compliment that they are so good they can do things that are better than fan games xd don't search for haters where there are none xd
Hi! Thanks for playing it. Yes, it's on a very early state. The plan is to expand it content wise, add more characters, challenges and improve the art department.
I really like how the money you get in each job is randomized. This makes the game feel much less repetitive.
I like how easily you can refill your stamina by either sleeping or getting the stamina drug once you have enough money.
I feel like there's no real reason to go to the café at this point because the studio pays much better, so this place definitely needs improvement asap.
I think it would be nice if each work option told you how much stamina it costs and if each mall option told you how much happiness you would get. I mean, I learn it eventually, but it would be nice if it told you, for instance, that the fetish option costs 10 stamina.
I don't really get why the nsfw scenes are censored. This is a porn game, so why exactly is there censorship?
Hi! Thank you very much for you input! It really helps having this kind of feedback. I can implement by the next update hte suggestiong of item 4. Regarding the Café maybe I need to rework the whole thing, but I think I won't be doind it right now. I want to give the option of a normal work/no corruption path. Maybe it needs some sort of advantage and/or reward. I'm planning on add more professions both "normal" and "corrupted" ones. I totally agree with you on 5, I used most of those scenes as placeholders for better scenes in the near future. I'm trying to make them animated using Koikatsu, so no more censorship and better expirience. I hope you stick around and watch the game grow!
Alright. I finished this current update. Here are my thoughts. Sorry if these are long, I just want to get all of my opinions out.
I miss the original "fetish porn" images. It stinks that there is only one of them now. I particularly miss the one with the ribbons, since that one felt unique.
I like the adventure option. It's a good way to either get early money at the potential cost of corruption (if you're in the early game) or a good way to get rid of excess corruption (if you're in the late game). As you mentioned previously, if someone wanted to do a "pure route," adventure would probably be their go-to option.
When you update the café, could you add an image associated with the option where Furina only wears the apron? It feels like there should be an image associated with that one, but there isn't.
I didn't say this with the last demo, even though this also applies to that one, but I really like how when you lose and Furina gets all out of whack (whether it be from depression or corruption), the game doesn't instantly boot you back to the title screen. That's really helpful for stopping people from losing all of their progress.
At the bottom-right corner of the "adventure tavern," there is a little bit of incomprehensible text that came from the ai generation.
I think that the one image in the normal advertising photoshoot when Furina is doing a squat might be a little lewd for an advertisement. (this is a joke)
The "fetish porn" option displays the incorrect amount of stamina required. It says 5, while it really costs 10.
I feel like the images used for both the "escort" and "hookup" option should just be used for one of them, since Furina gains happiness during the "hookup" option but she loses happiness during the "escort" option. Despite this, she looks sad during both. Plus, I miss the original image, since she looked happier there.
I feel like the normal corruption drug and normal happiness drug are kinda useless. You gain money so fast that there's really no reason to get the normal ones at basically any point.
I'm still not sure what the "side effects" of the drugs are. Has that been added in yet?
I have no notes for the "porn movie" and "bikini photoshoot" options. The images used for those are very good.
I'd personally add more images for the "naked photoshoot" option. Two is just not enough in my opinion.
Sometimes, the "go on an adventure" option crashes my game. It's never crashed before this point. I think it might have something to do with the images.
[This one is for the future, not the current build] You don't have to add this if you don't want to, but I'd like to know more about the bosses. Who exactly is this "Charlotte" and what are her goals? She knows Furina from her past, which can lead to some interesting story opportunities. Her being the only other named character in the game right now makes her feel more important than she currently is. I mean, the manager of the café doesn't have a name or a face, making Charlotte seem a lot more important. Maybe the ability to talk to Charlotte/the café Manager and maybe even romance them(???) could go a long way to making the world feel more lived in. Getting to know your boss seems like a normal thing to do during work, right? Also, if you want to go down this route, maybe there could be a chance that one of your bosses shows up while you're drinking at the bar, since right now there don't seem to be any perks to alcoholism that can't be achieved by eating fast food, which also doesn't even increment your corruption.
I thought of another idea. Right now, it’s easy to get way too much money in like 10 days no matter which route due to the fact that you can easily get $400 per day adventuring. So, to fix this, maybe you could add a weekly rent/tax thing where you have to pay a set amount of money every seven days or else you instantly lose. This would definitely make players think about money more, and isn’t that the point when Furina is supposed to be somewhat poor?
Keep up the good work, luminara! I am excited to see this game grow.
Hi! Sorry for the late reply, but I only wanted to reply when I adressed your suggestions. Your feedback helped me a lot and I can't thank you enough for helping me developing this project.
1 - Added more fetish images matching the old ones, more to come.
2 - Glad to hear it! I want to add more things to it like random encounters with characters.
3 - It might sound funny, but it already had images for her only wearing the apron, but someone (me) forgot to reference them, now it's fixed!
4 - Thanks! I want the player to have fun and have the chance to explore multiple endings and playstyles.
5 - Fixed!
6 - Naughty Furina! lol
7 - Fixed!
8 - Will add more images and separate those set of images
9 - I removed the smaller drugs to see how it balances the game.
10 - for now the only side effect is leading Furina to the junkie ending. I haven't implemented others, but they are coming.
11 - I'm happy to hear it!
12 - More images added! I learned more tecniques that are producing prettier art and less weird results.
13 - One of the images was misspelled making that error, fixed!
14 - I have plans to add the option to date those characters and others. The idea of randomly meeting someone at the bar or increasing the relationship with your boss while working will make the places feel more interesting and alive. I want to add this to the next big update that I hope will go live by next week.
14.1 - Just for context: Charlotte is a famous journalist and a photographer in the Genshin universe, in the game I'm focusing more on the photographer aspect of her and planning to build her relationship with Furina based on that.
15 - I made a few changes and lowered some salaries, also added the daily rent cost. For now is low, only $50, just so we see how it feels. My plan is add more houses and make it a huge factor changing how much happiness, corruptions and other factors she wins or loses everyday.
16(?) - I also plan on changing the UI, making it prettier and organized. But that probably won't happen in the next update.
I'm checking if everything is okay to upload the uptade that will fix those!
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Every time I use rest causes an error. Something about rent value
A couple things. Pressing stamina drug froze the game. And also font error.
Thanks for letting me know! I'll look into it!
please make a story not borrowed from genshit... you are clearly capable of making your own char but you limit yourself with... this
What, fan content isn't allowed?
STOP THE PRESSES, FAN CONTENT ISN'T ALLOWED ANYMORE!
It's more like the creator could actually make money off of non-fan content. The Wind's Disciple is an excellent example of a full game that is sadly limited by being fan stuff. If the premise of a game CAN be detached from a fan setting, it should. If not, that's fine.
I have some original ideas lined up after I finish this game. This one is more like a passion project so even if it don't make money it's okay. My main objective is to improve my skills and have some fun in the process. But I do undestand your point.
this was actually a compliment that they are so good they can do things that are better than fan games xd don't search for haters where there are none xd
Is this just a demo?
If so, I am very interested to see where this goes in the future. It definitely has potential.
Hi! Thanks for playing it. Yes, it's on a very early state. The plan is to expand it content wise, add more characters, challenges and improve the art department.
Here's a review on my experience with this demo:
Hi! Thank you very much for you input! It really helps having this kind of feedback. I can implement by the next update hte suggestiong of item 4. Regarding the Café maybe I need to rework the whole thing, but I think I won't be doind it right now. I want to give the option of a normal work/no corruption path. Maybe it needs some sort of advantage and/or reward. I'm planning on add more professions both "normal" and "corrupted" ones. I totally agree with you on 5, I used most of those scenes as placeholders for better scenes in the near future. I'm trying to make them animated using Koikatsu, so no more censorship and better expirience. I hope you stick around and watch the game grow!
Well, I'm following you, so just keep making updates and I'll continue checking this game out! But, don't overwork yourself.
Alright. I finished this current update. Here are my thoughts. Sorry if these are long, I just want to get all of my opinions out.
Keep up the good work, luminara! I am excited to see this game grow.
Hi! Sorry for the late reply, but I only wanted to reply when I adressed your suggestions. Your feedback helped me a lot and I can't thank you enough for helping me developing this project.
1 - Added more fetish images matching the old ones, more to come.
2 - Glad to hear it! I want to add more things to it like random encounters with characters.
3 - It might sound funny, but it already had images for her only wearing the apron, but someone (me) forgot to reference them, now it's fixed!
4 - Thanks! I want the player to have fun and have the chance to explore multiple endings and playstyles.
5 - Fixed!
6 - Naughty Furina! lol
7 - Fixed!
8 - Will add more images and separate those set of images
9 - I removed the smaller drugs to see how it balances the game.
10 - for now the only side effect is leading Furina to the junkie ending. I haven't implemented others, but they are coming.
11 - I'm happy to hear it!
12 - More images added! I learned more tecniques that are producing prettier art and less weird results.
13 - One of the images was misspelled making that error, fixed!
14 - I have plans to add the option to date those characters and others. The idea of randomly meeting someone at the bar or increasing the relationship with your boss while working will make the places feel more interesting and alive. I want to add this to the next big update that I hope will go live by next week.
14.1 - Just for context: Charlotte is a famous journalist and a photographer in the Genshin universe, in the game I'm focusing more on the photographer aspect of her and planning to build her relationship with Furina based on that.
15 - I made a few changes and lowered some salaries, also added the daily rent cost. For now is low, only $50, just so we see how it feels. My plan is add more houses and make it a huge factor changing how much happiness, corruptions and other factors she wins or loses everyday.
16(?) - I also plan on changing the UI, making it prettier and organized. But that probably won't happen in the next update.
I'm checking if everything is okay to upload the uptade that will fix those!